I came across quite the adventure story in Sunday's New York Times, and it was all true. The difference between this story and a short story? Everything in it was based on interviewing and asking for examples and anecdotes.
Here is the lead:
His Plane Crashed in the Amazon. Then Came the Hard Part.
A Brazilian pilot working for wildcat miners escaped death
when his plane went down in a remote area. He walked through the jungle for 36
days before being rescued.
By Manuela Andreoni / The New York Times / March 28,
2021
RIO DE JANEIRO — The pilot was 3,000 feet over the Amazon,
flying a small propeller plane on his maiden assignment for wildcat miners deep
in the forest, when the lone engine cut out.
He took a deep breath and scanned the vast emerald green canopy
below. He had about five minutes, he calculated, to bring down the plane and
its highly flammable cargo: 160 gallons of diesel fuel.
He reported his imminent crash over a portable radio to
whoever might be listening, noting that he was about halfway to his
destination, a mine known as California.
Then, as his plane barreled down, Antônio Sena aimed for a
small valley lined with palm trees.
“There!” he recalls thinking. “Palm trees mean there is
water, perhaps a river.”
Since becoming a pilot nine years earlier, Mr. Sena had
heard countless stories about fatal crashes. But while his plane scraped a few
trees and then smashed into the ground, Mr. Sena realized something
exhilarating as he rolled to a halt: He had survived.
Of course, simply surviving, as the subhead implies, is just the opening scene that puts our main character and the readers into the challenging situation.
In so many situations, dropping readers into a key scene is a great way to pull them in. It's no different than most opening scenes we see on TV. You know. The ones that make us hang in there to see what happens after that first commercial.
Some call this "writing cinematically." If you were writing a script, what would be that opening shot. What would the first dialog be?
No comments:
Post a Comment